Errant flute scale pierces my reverie.
As I lift my gaze, numerous scenes capture my attention:
The box-shouldered bartitone
blots sweat from his brow,
while brooding
over the score of his impending solo.
Shine-waxy woodwinds
(bassoons and clarinets alike)
catch and hold filmy light,
as happy tools personify
glee at their approaching moment.
Balding brass players
commiserate and conjecture
as to length of rehearsal this eve
while they stroke and tune their horns
with skill and care.
Nimble digits
pluck taught strings
joyfully,
as eyes close in enjoyment
of wavering melodious strains.
Maestro bent
with concentrated intent -
god of chaotic tones that swirl around him -
rises to full height,
commanding attention from all.
He raises his arms.
Silence falls.
Lustrous lungs of lithe soprano soloist
expand, then expel
nirvana's nectar
in tones tremulous, thrilling,
tender.
Coppery French horns
drip viscous harmonies,
as stale breath pressed forth in effort
unites in a consonance matching
in intensity of angel-fire streaming.
As fat fingers firmly grip faded scores,
eyes squint, adjust to stagelights.
Sizable sopranos,
owners of crass-crude speaking voices
morph into toy piano-colored
breathiness incarnate.
Yet, out of the clamor of
crooked and defective lumps of flesh
flies sound that rivals the glory of any heaven in pure brilliance.
Unknown to all,
a single, taciturn star
rests in the tear-filled eye
of a young hopeful.
Dark lashes curl upward,
revealing unspeakable yearning.
Stranded, enraptured heart
bursts for want of music everlasting.















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