Shadows in the dark ...
but it is dark, so black...
shadows?
it's impossible to see shadows in the dark,
idiot.
Only you would know.
You're immersed in the dark,
blackness that to you is light,
but to me is pain.
How do you embrace it?
it is who i am.
i don't grow up, i just am.
pain is what i know, because i knew it then
(shhhh.....the shadows are my memories.....
you can't see them.....)
Show me! I want to know the truth you're hiding!
Your truth could free me from the split,
the unholy dichotomy,
the essence of division.
Tell me, and we can be One.
no, stupid, then i die.
i become you, and that's the end.
i'll keep my shadows in the dark
far away from you.
©2005-2009 =anextraordinarygirl
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Submitted: October 4, 2005
File Size: 1.0 KB
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Comments: 14
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the experiences of a female who battles with herself intricately - and quite literally. this woman lives as two every day. a suggestion of the life lived inside...
the experiences of a female who battles with herself intricately - and quite literally. this woman lives as two every day. a suggestion of the life lived inside...
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CommentsAwesome..I like this..
 -- Don't let the sweet lil' avie fool ya'!  thanks so much!
-- "I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong Wow, you noticed..
 You're so welcome! You are very courageous! -- Don't let the sweet lil' avie fool ya'! normaly i am not a poetry type person, but i like this one.
-- God WAS my co-pilot, but the plane crashed in the mountains and I ate him. thanks! what do you like about it, if you don't mind? i'm trying to improve and need feedback....
-- "I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong what i liked was.. even without your description i would've known what it was about, lots of great imaging!
-- God WAS my co-pilot, but the plane crashed in the mountains and I ate him. oh, that is so cool! that's the best compliment i've gotten, for real. thank you, very much
-- "I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong Very good writing,
Nice poem. --        aka Tzachi GvaramYes .. the shadows
also in pitch-dark times gone .. even so .. ever will they hark! the shadows are real especially those I feel. uime  |
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